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Tabo's avatar

While I agree with most of what you say and applaud the intention... I feel like I am reading some kind of Tourette's writing. Your points are strong and correct. But why on earth do you come up with tropes like:

"It is simply indicative of an occupation army killing people for sport, just as we saw in Schindler’s List."

Why on earth would you refer to a Hollywood depiction of the Jewish Shoah? It doesn't make your piece stronger, it takes away!

" The objective from the outset has been to dehumanise the Palestinians in both Gaza and the West Bank, just as the Nazi’s dehumanised the Jews in concentration camps across Europe."

What is this "just as the Nazi's"? Why do you feel the need to use this trope? I feel that your text and arguments stand for themselves, where they are strong and valid. But then tourette kicks in. Is that the only way you think you can talk to a US audience about what is happening? While not taking away from the Palestiniean suffering it clearly is not "as the Nazi's" - (in scale or appearance, its just not a helpful image) you are just drawn to this comparisation because ... of the irony of history! The way it sounds so powerful! Tourette's...

Frances's avatar

Thank you for this post . It was excellent.

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